Wed
27
Jan
2010
We the business class, introduce to you this business project to help the guangzhou zoo by selling our own products in making a profit which will be given to a charity or the school's fund. This will be the first step we take out for business which will be the chance for us to aquire skills, learn, and get real experience. Through this whole process we will be cooperating with the class and communicating with the customer, this will be a great oppurtunity for us as a class, individual, and team.
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